Her bondage sandals
skip to the loo and dance
her slow way back home
I love the brevity in such a concise form. Gotta love your Haiku.
This poem about shoes,
Makes me grateful for Converse,
My favorite lace-ups.
So much said in so few words! Wonderful!
lol i’ve had shoes like that ..well done and thank you
have fun today.
Oh, that was great! Love your picture. Thank you!
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super brilliant, smiles.
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Love your blog and writing style.
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